Blue ink fiddler

After sending my latest article "Love and something close to love" to some friends, I received a response from my writing friend Patricia (we've exchanged poems and she has helped me translating my poems into Spanish). 

Have fun reading it, and please don't hesitate to share whatever brings to your mind, as one of the actions of love is sharing :)

  

This is her e-mail to me:

Dear Huei, thank you for sharing your thoughts, I'm utterly moved and wrote a little bit myself after reading your words. I hope you don't mind:

Blue ink fiddler  by Patricia Albornoz

Clueless but curious, like the white cat

Words about rebirth arrived unexpectedly in virtual paper

Obvious wreckage but not havoc in sight

What could have happened to her-- to them

If you leave, keep your head off your sleeve

Warm breeze

When you write, keep the heart in blue ink

Puzzled but relieved like open played violin string

Her words about love and egocentric rage

Afraid still of the damaged walls and derby all around 

Sound derby all around him-- them

When you leave, keep your eyes off your sleeve

Quiet sleep

When you write, I know you'll write- keep the mind in blue ink

The only way out would be through, the given advice

Not assuaged ears nor anesthetized heart to react

Not love inside but outside, in the mind, love inside the mind

Black words printed on unsympathetic paper I've got

Now that you've left, keep your head off the sleeve

Breath in, breath out to heal

When you write, keep the heart in bright blue ink 

Love,

Pati